Sun Down
As the fiery oranges, glowing reds and bright yellows of the
glorious day bled away into a dull night sky, life stirred in the abandoned
warehouse by the rundown riverside. The
setting of the sun was the beginning of the day for Juliana and her followers
as they rose above the iconic white chimneys, ready to descend, causing chaos
and anarchy in their search for the perfect fix.
But fear made the
once bustling night life of London a desolate place as Juliana swooped,
searching desperately; a victim of her own success by the imposed curfew to
save the innocent. . . .
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Full of imagery and detail...wonderful!
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DeleteBeautifully written. I loved this! I wanted more!! :)
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DeleteBeautiful!
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DeleteLove the striking imagery and totally want to know MORE!! Wonderful closing line: "a victim of her own success..." :)
ReplyDeleteThank you. I enjoyed writing this one. xxx
DeleteGood details.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Once I came across the picture, i knew what i wanted to write. xx
DeleteGreat imagery, killer closing line and it's left me intrigued and wanting to know more!
ReplyDeleteGreat post!
Carlie :-D
I hope to add more sooner rather than later. I'm pleased you like. xxx
DeleteFantastic post :)
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DeleteA fabulous piece, Lizzie! So much imagery packed in!
ReplyDeleteThank you. I enjoyed writing it. xx
DeleteWow! I love this piece. It leaves me wanting to read more.
ReplyDeleteYay! I hope to do some more. Glad you liked. xx
DeleteA bit dark and foreboding, a taste of more to come?
ReplyDeleteHope so. xx
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