With each skillful stroke of the pencil, the portrait was taking shape;
the image was proof of Jodi’s memory. She was seeing it clearly now as every minute
detail gave the image life, like looking at a photograph such was the depth of
detail. It was amazing how realistic it was considering it was all created by
memory, without him, the muse for want of a better word, in front of her.
She shuddered at the thought.
“Everything ok Jodi?” She nodded. “Won’t be long now until
your description is out there and we catch him” offered DCI Blackwood confidently.
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Very evocative post. wonderful!
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DeleteReally strong piece Lizzie, hard hitting once again!
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DeleteReally well written piece. Vivid.
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DeleteDitto to everything above Lizzie! Scary really. :0)
ReplyDeleteAt least she lived to tell the tale. . . Thanks for visiting.xx
DeleteExcellent, sometimes we look but we don't see.
ReplyDeleteVery true Lesley. xx
DeleteWhat a twist! I didn't consider until the end that she might be sketching a criminal. It's a wonderful piece, Lizzie!
ReplyDeleteThank you. I like my little twists. xxx
DeleteAbsolutely wonderful!!! Terrific story as well as awesome take on the prompt!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ruth. Took a while to finally get there. xx
DeleteFab story with a great twist - amazing take on the prompt, Lizzie. Loved it! xx
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