My second attempt at Flash Friday, hosted by Rebekah Postupak over at http://flashfriday.wordpress.com/ where you can read all the other entries. As always, there's a picture prompt which I struggled with this week. But I managed something and even some conversation which I barely do in my flashes. But I read it to Hubby and he hates it. . . . .maybe I should dump him in a pit of snakes. . . . .
Task One
Juliet headed up the dusty hill, discarding her empty water
bottle; her only obstacle now the relentless sun and her raging thirst. She
rounded the craggy hill and there, shining in front of her was the silver dome
of the balloon. She afforded a smile despite her cracked lips, knowing she was
within reach of the prize; a map as well as her life and her nearest rival was
nowhere in sight.
Juliet stared as the
balloon began to lift.
Vaughn!
He waved the map teasingly, as the balloon rose, a winner’s smile spread
across his face.
“Throw me a rope!” Juliet couldn’t lose, not now she was so
close and death now clawing at her heels.
“And why would I do that? You tried to kill me.” Juliet ran,
keeping up with Vaughn.
“I think that’s a slight exaggeration Vaughn.”
“You left me in a pit of snakes!”
“Which were harmless.” Juliet tripped, sprawled flat out. A
rope dangled tantalisingly close as Juliet grabbed for it successfully, swinging
perilously above the desert.
“Maybe we should work together?” Vaughn offered as he pulled
her into the basket.
“Work and relationships don’t mix dear husband” she grinned,
plucking the map from his grasp as task one was now complete.
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I like it!!! I think you should leave your hubby in a pit of snakes. Very cute story. xxxx
ReplyDeleteThank you Jan. It was hard this one, but needed the challenge to get the creative juices flowing. xx
DeleteGood ssetting scene and shock but ended too quickly for my liking ... ;-) x
ReplyDeleteLoved it x
I know; 200 word limit is tough . . .it may be something to expand on. xx
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