Sunday, 26 August 2012

Seeing Day 26

Yikes!!! Only four more writes then #BlogFlash 2012 is over! Here's my entry for day 26; Seeing. x
With each skillful stroke of the pencil, the portrait was taking shape; the image was proof of Jodi’s memory. She was seeing it clearly now as every minute detail gave the image life, like looking at a photograph such was the depth of detail. It was amazing how realistic it was considering it was all created by memory, without him, the muse for want of a better word, in front of her.
She shuddered at the thought.
“Everything ok Jodi?” She nodded. “Won’t be long now until your description is out there and we catch him” offered DCI Blackwood confidently.

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Day twenty-six of the jump-on-board-for-blogflash2012-30-days-30-prompts-30-posts/ coutesey of Terri Giuliano Long. Pop along to her page The Art and Craft of Writing Creatively for wonderful tips and advice on writing and for reading the entries from wonderful writers.

15 comments:

  1. Really strong piece Lizzie, hard hitting once again!

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  2. Really well written piece. Vivid.

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  3. Ditto to everything above Lizzie! Scary really. :0)

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    1. At least she lived to tell the tale. . . Thanks for visiting.xx

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  4. Excellent, sometimes we look but we don't see.

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  5. What a twist! I didn't consider until the end that she might be sketching a criminal. It's a wonderful piece, Lizzie!

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    1. Thank you. I like my little twists. xxx

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  6. Absolutely wonderful!!! Terrific story as well as awesome take on the prompt!!!

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    1. Thanks Ruth. Took a while to finally get there. xx

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  7. Fab story with a great twist - amazing take on the prompt, Lizzie. Loved it! xx

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