Gale stood at the top
window, the nets billowing around him as he watched the couple
outside in his garden. They seemed more interested than most; it was
their second viewing and their excitement tangible, even in the
garden that had seen better days. He watched intently as the couple
stood on the patio, his heart thumping hard inside his chest, his
voice catching in the back of his throat as silence drifted from his
lips.
“Do you think think
they're going to buy it?” Mia asked, joining Gale by the window.
She liked this couple. They reminded her of when she first looked at
the house, wanting it instantly, feeling it was right. A second
viewing was a good sign and the estate agent didn't seem to be over
working it or trying the hard sell which was the best sign of all.
“We'll see. I don't
want to think about it and what it could mean for us.” He returned
a warm smile to Mia and squeezed her hand as the couple wandered back
into the house.
From the stairs, Gale
watched as the man stood at the French doors, looking at the garden.
It was an oasis within the city and Gale remembered many a summer eve
sitting out on the patio with a beer in hand chatting with Mia after
dining alfresco. But now was the time for others to enjoy the garden
and the house like he had. He and Mia needed to move on and hopefully
now was the time.
“So,” began the
man, turning to face the estate agent, “you said we can move in
straight away and all furnishings come with the price?”
“Yep, no chain, just
a straight forward sale. 10K has already been knocked off the price
so it really is a good deal to be snapped up right away.” The man
turned to face the garden again. Gale watched him, his interest
piqued by the man's fascination with the garden.
“I think he's going
to free us from this place Mia, I really do,” Gale whispered. He
continued to watch the couple as they whispered amongst themselves,
looking at each other intently then towards the garden.
It seemed an eternity
before the man turned to the smiling estate agent, “we'll take it,”
he stated firmly, a broad smile spreading across his face. “I'm
sure we can make this place a home again.”
“Indeed you can,”
the estate agent said eagerly, shaking his hand firmly. “I'll start
the ball rolling.” He left the couple, walking out to the hallway,
mobile phone already at his ear.
“I know this house
has a history Deb's but the location, the price, I just feel so at
home here and comfortable.”
“Me too,” she
replied., drawn to the garden with her gaze.
“The garden is
beautiful Deb's but I don't like the patio. I'm thinking of ripping
it up, decking the area and landscaping the rest.”
Gale and Mia knowingly
looked towards each other, hope creeping in to their hearts that they
could really be moving and leaving this house behind. It was a happy
home once upon a time and would be once again.
“Right, “ the
estate agent said, “in six weeks then, this should be yours with no
hiccups on the mortgage front. And you'll have a nice bit left over
no doubt for some home repairs, really put your stamp on the place.”
“Yeah, Mark wants to
start on the garden first,” Deb's replied.
“Good, yes, well,
right, I'm sure the neighbours are going to be thrilled have the
place full of life again. Put all the nastiness behind them and this
house.”
“You said the couple
disappeared? What's nasty about that?” the man asked.
“Well, the police
have suggested foul play.”
“But there's no
evidence of that is there?” he said, glancing to the patio.
“Well no bodies if
that's what you mean.”
“Oh my gosh Gale,”
Mia exclaimed, “he knows. We're going to be free.”
“I knew he was going
to be the one Mia, I could feel it. He'll do as he said; dig up the
patio, find us there and we'll be free.” He kissed her softly
before they both drifted up the staircase to their bedroom, over
looking their resting place in the garden.
You had me with this one Lizzie, nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lisa. I wasn't sure where I was going with it at one point. xxx
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