Here's my first attempt at Thursday Threads, hosted by siobhan muir over at Thursthreads-challenge-that-ties-tales. As with most flash fiction, there are rules. Here goes.
1. No more than 250 words, no less that 100.
2. This week's thread must include the line They were small countries.
3. In by 7pm this Thursday. . . best I get posting!
The Dinner date
Seeking refuge in another glass of wine, Emma drowned out her husband’s monotonous tone. She had no idea why he had suddenly decided they should eat out; the romance had died long ago, withered away like the flowers he used to buy her. They hadn’t been this close in ages; always ate separately, went to bed at different times. Now, as they sat around this small intimate table, she felt the gulf between them. They were small countries with their own customs and language. And he was a country she didn't want to visit anymore.
“You look beautiful” David said as he chomped on steak. He didn't even raise his eyes to look at her; not seeing the little black dress she wore perfectly that skimmed her curves; when walking into the restaurant, Emma felt eyes boring into her, filling her with feelings she hadn't felt in years and yet her husband had not noticed. “Which makes what I’m about to say ridiculous. Come, I need fresh air. If I divorce you, I lose half of everything. I can’t have that happen.” Without warning a masked man from nowhere knocked into them with such force that Emma fell to the floor as the raider ran. “So I arranged this little incident.” David loomed over her as blood oozed from her chest. “Goodbye Emma. I wish I could say it was fun.” He smiled before standing up “My wife! My wife! She’s been stabbed! Help. I think she’s been murdered!”
249 (excluding title)
Very clever, and so evil and devious of David.ReplyDelete
Hi Lesley!!! I love when you visit!!! Hope you're well. Glad you liked my first attempt into the Thursday Thread. It's tricky when you're given a phrase to include.Delete
Oh God ... such an evil husband !!!ReplyDelete
He is rather chilling isn't he? xxDelete
wow what an ending!!! brill twist :DReplyDelete
Thank you. Pleased you liked. xxDelete
This can't be the same Emma from the Five Sentence Fiction "cherish" prompt, can it? If it is, how could things have gone so wrong? She sure gets around - but not any longer...ReplyDelete
No it's not; two completely different stories and characters. My 'Cherish' characters remained unnamed. xDelete