Here's my first attempt at Thursday Threads, hosted by siobhan muir over at Thursthreads-challenge-that-ties-tales. As with most flash fiction, there are rules. Here goes.
1. No more than 250 words, no less that 100.
2. This week's thread must include the line They were small countries.
3. In by 7pm this Thursday. . . best I get posting!
The Dinner date
Seeking refuge in another glass of wine, Emma drowned out
her husband’s monotonous tone. She had no idea why he had suddenly decided they
should eat out; the romance had died long ago, withered away like the flowers
he used to buy her. They hadn’t been
this close in ages; always ate separately, went to bed at different times. Now,
as they sat around this small intimate table, she felt the gulf between them.
They were small countries with their own customs and language. And he was a
country she didn't want to visit anymore.
“You look beautiful” David said as he chomped on steak. He didn't even raise his eyes to look at her; not seeing the little black dress she wore
perfectly that skimmed her curves; when walking into the restaurant, Emma felt eyes
boring into her, filling her with feelings she hadn't felt in years and yet her
husband had not noticed. “Which makes what I’m about to say ridiculous. Come, I need fresh air. If I divorce you, I lose
half of everything. I can’t have that happen.” Without warning a masked man
from nowhere knocked into them with such force that Emma fell to the floor as
the raider ran. “So I arranged this little incident.” David loomed over her as
blood oozed from her chest. “Goodbye Emma. I wish I could say it was fun.” He smiled
before standing up “My wife! My wife! She’s been stabbed! Help. I think she’s
been murdered!”
249 (excluding title)
