Showing posts with label Flash!Friday. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Flash!Friday. Show all posts

Friday, 9 August 2013

Flash!Friday #36 Behind the Smile



Flash!Friday with Rebekah Postupak and a mean 99 words this week . . . there's only one good thing about 99; the ice cream with a delicious chocolate flake but here, it's been a nightmare trying to get a story into 99 words!! But after much cutting and dicing, I have come up with this little tale from the photograph of today's prompt.   



Behind the Smile

Bill stared at his old, cuffed hands. Silently, a photo was placed in front of him. Familiarity flickered in aging eyes, then pain. 
“Tell me about this photograph Bill,” the soft voice coaxed. “This is you?” He pointed to the baby where the nurse’s hand touched his ear.
“She’s pinching my ear; smiling away . . . . . . . No one knew what she did to me.  . . . . . . . For years  . . . .  I suffered . . . .  . . with her evil.”  
“I can see behind her smile Bill. This explains your vicious attacks on nurses. You’ll get nothing but sympathy in court, I’ll make sure of it,” his lawyer smiled confidently.   


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Friday, 26 July 2013

Flash!Friday #34 Snap!




Snap!

“Happy anniversary!” Ben exclaimed as the car ascended through wispy clouds, revealing  crisp blue skies. “I’m so glad you had hypnotherapy to do this. It means so much to me.” He kissed her hand as she pressed her face against the glass, beaming from ear to ear at the majesty surrounding her. “Of course, all I have to do is snap my fingers. . . . . You’d have a heart attack . . . . . It would be the perfect murder.” She laughed nervously. Snap. . . .   


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70-80 words this week for Rebekah Postupak's Flash!Friday.  For more short stories set in the clouds, hop over and visit. xxx