tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post7852673586035520553..comments2023-10-22T16:41:05.861+01:00Comments on Lizzie Koch Author : 5 Sentence Fiction ArmourAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-13880700107325613132012-04-19T06:45:38.263+01:002012-04-19T06:45:38.263+01:00Thank you! xxThank you! xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-20541016529217631692012-04-19T06:45:11.269+01:002012-04-19T06:45:11.269+01:00Thank you! xxThank you! xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-88136622669347019742012-04-19T03:29:23.973+01:002012-04-19T03:29:23.973+01:00Loved the ending! Well done!
http://jenniferworrel...Loved the ending! Well done!<br />http://jenniferworrell.wordpress.comJennifer Worrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11404227749975360454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-41696156621036258422012-04-17T22:28:36.186+01:002012-04-17T22:28:36.186+01:00I thought she might have fallen asleep and woken i...I thought she might have fallen asleep and woken in a funny position. I bet she wish she had, given the twist.<br /><br />Nice work :)Danhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12536489996170686900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-70048384981702369892012-04-17T16:14:39.912+01:002012-04-17T16:14:39.912+01:00Thank you! It's lovely when someone else likes...Thank you! It's lovely when someone else likes it; and to think I didn't think this one was any good! Thanks for visitng and reading. xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-42102410781641332392012-04-17T16:13:36.827+01:002012-04-17T16:13:36.827+01:00Thank you; sounds like I have a writing style with...Thank you; sounds like I have a writing style with my endings. Glad you liked; means a lot. xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-43599991764135869142012-04-17T16:12:29.534+01:002012-04-17T16:12:29.534+01:00It's other road users that need to be careful ...It's other road users that need to be careful when it comes to the biker. Take care and thank you for visitng and commenting. xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-65339777189547227692012-04-16T18:14:57.213+01:002012-04-16T18:14:57.213+01:00This surprise ending packed a whallup! Love all t...This surprise ending packed a whallup! Love all the peaceful imagery leading up to it. Good job.Jayne Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01053366144206401836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-10452936145070758062012-04-16T02:29:26.775+01:002012-04-16T02:29:26.775+01:00I love the imagery in the beginning as trees and s...I love the imagery in the beginning as trees and sunlight are some of my favorite things :) You always make me smile with your creative endings!Lillie McFerrinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05367116687588265202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-74932441722162315782012-04-16T00:13:31.926+01:002012-04-16T00:13:31.926+01:00Love the stories with twists! Great idea and execu...Love the stories with twists! Great idea and execution...well she almost was, wasn't she? (I'll be careful on my bike now!)Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-88982807041343128742012-04-15T21:49:07.261+01:002012-04-15T21:49:07.261+01:00Trust you Toni! Glad you liked. xxxTrust you Toni! Glad you liked. xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-61470143579733184122012-04-15T21:48:19.603+01:002012-04-15T21:48:19.603+01:00Why thank you; I do like to tease and not be so ob...Why thank you; I do like to tease and not be so obvious. xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-87190920537981746102012-04-15T21:47:04.315+01:002012-04-15T21:47:04.315+01:00Thank you chick. And to think this was one that ne...Thank you chick. And to think this was one that nearly got away as didn't feel too confident about it. How wrong was I? xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-42564722243179392722012-04-15T20:29:43.839+01:002012-04-15T20:29:43.839+01:00Excellent Honey, loved the twist at the end though...Excellent Honey, loved the twist at the end thought she was up to no good with her legs up in the air lol xxxTonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16867640399112011325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-35112779132095238792012-04-15T18:59:47.842+01:002012-04-15T18:59:47.842+01:00Very clever ending!Very clever ending!Melanie Colehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06677477295913962657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-88265834325298529272012-04-15T18:56:24.068+01:002012-04-15T18:56:24.068+01:00I loved how you led the reader down the proverbial...I loved how you led the reader down the proverbial path with bread crumbs.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03593523034769971203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-79638075310894341532012-04-15T18:27:59.737+01:002012-04-15T18:27:59.737+01:00Thank you! I like the middle too; a few little clu...Thank you! I like the middle too; a few little clues to make you ask questions but nothing more . . makes you want to read on (hopefully). xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-59989881193852351892012-04-15T16:57:49.432+01:002012-04-15T16:57:49.432+01:00I really love the ending, but I love the middle mo...I really love the ending, but I love the middle more. First time through I was thinking, "Why are her legs at odd angles?" And then I read the end and thought, "Ohhhhhhh!" So good. Five Sentence Foreshadowing...yay!lindseyfairleighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16810965502518100733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-64681901540606880032012-04-15T16:29:33.567+01:002012-04-15T16:29:33.567+01:00I replied to yours in the wrong place lol; your re...I replied to yours in the wrong place lol; your reply is belowozy Doris that I am. xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-73712680861935417782012-04-15T16:28:37.477+01:002012-04-15T16:28:37.477+01:00I struggled with the last sentence sooo much to ge...I struggled with the last sentence sooo much to get in and then after it was proof read, it was posted. Maybe a bit more time editing and improving. . . But glad you liked.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-6766201704090660562012-04-15T16:22:00.580+01:002012-04-15T16:22:00.580+01:00It's not for the want of trying and what with ...It's not for the want of trying and what with postage going up in a few weeks it's going to cost me even more. Thanks for commenting; means lots and I do like my little twist . . hook the reader then bam lol. xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-47273274237846312272012-04-15T16:02:12.667+01:002012-04-15T16:02:12.667+01:00Clever idea! The last sentence was a bit long... :...Clever idea! The last sentence was a bit long... :-)<br />I'll be popping back for more, and hoping for news of that book deal.<br />BW,<br />Lesley x.Lesley Beetonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18384323023378437869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-85002285563756073252012-04-15T15:43:41.120+01:002012-04-15T15:43:41.120+01:00Brilliant, I love your 5 Second Fiction ones the b...Brilliant, I love your 5 Second Fiction ones the best, always a little twist at the end.<br />Well done you, get that book out soon. xxxxThe 40 Year Old Domestic Godddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06269641033022945207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-74220491900926379972012-04-15T15:33:53.633+01:002012-04-15T15:33:53.633+01:00I'm glad you like. I wanted to create an atmos...I'm glad you like. I wanted to create an atmosphere of a gorgeous sunny day, sunbathing and then . . .<br />May just have pipped the Highway Man for my fav too. As for Max . . . that would be telling. . .xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-59788811959629760892012-04-15T15:09:07.215+01:002012-04-15T15:09:07.215+01:00Ohhhhhh......I am glad that Max is still alive!!! ...Ohhhhhh......I am glad that Max is still alive!!! Right? I love this one Mrs. Koch. It might be my favourite one so far.Jan F.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04469298095233206280noreply@blogger.com