tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post6014232073860116307..comments2023-10-22T16:41:05.861+01:00Comments on Lizzie Koch Author : 5 Sentence Fiction DelicateAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-56034291917021834122013-02-07T21:27:01.728+00:002013-02-07T21:27:01.728+00:00What a lovely comment! Thank you. Delicate is not ...What a lovely comment! Thank you. Delicate is not a word usually associated with me in any aspect of my life. Glad you enjoyed it. xx Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-6178180859734074812013-02-07T21:25:07.329+00:002013-02-07T21:25:07.329+00:00Oh, I never knew there was a book called Perfume. ...Oh, I never knew there was a book called Perfume. I swear this is my own idea. But pleased you liked it. Thank you for visiting. xx Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-57795562118205075932013-02-07T21:23:56.637+00:002013-02-07T21:23:56.637+00:00Thank you. I have a feeling I need to expand on th...Thank you. I have a feeling I need to expand on this tale after all the comments. Thank you for visiting. xx Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-61741740487299263042013-02-07T21:22:08.342+00:002013-02-07T21:22:08.342+00:00Thanks Lisa. I enjoy writing the darker pieces too...Thanks Lisa. I enjoy writing the darker pieces too. xx Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-71462631756210257552013-02-07T21:21:17.849+00:002013-02-07T21:21:17.849+00:00I wish! Not sure I have the skill for all the twis...I wish! Not sure I have the skill for all the twists and turns a murder mystery needs . . but you never know. xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-14241295791441592672013-02-07T21:20:22.809+00:002013-02-07T21:20:22.809+00:00Thank you! I really appreciate that you visit and ...Thank you! I really appreciate that you visit and comment on my work regularly. I didn't want to give the game away too early so needed to string you along. . . sorry ;-) xx Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-51236572880178043222013-02-07T21:18:31.137+00:002013-02-07T21:18:31.137+00:00Oops, sorry. Glad you liked it though. I've on...Oops, sorry. Glad you liked it though. I've only just started wearing it. . .after working in a department store where they spray it constantly, it did put me off for a long time! Thanks for visting. xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-84657873276238731502013-02-07T21:16:58.158+00:002013-02-07T21:16:58.158+00:00I know. I was going to go down another route but i...I know. I was going to go down another route but it seemed too gentle and not going anywhere. I guess when it's dark, there's more to get your teeth into when there's only 5 sentences. Thank you for visiting. xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-26234051661936476012013-02-07T21:15:15.199+00:002013-02-07T21:15:15.199+00:00Thank you! I don't know what happens. . . .yet...Thank you! I don't know what happens. . . .yet ;-) Thank you for visiting. xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-75843860349603741162013-02-07T21:14:31.923+00:002013-02-07T21:14:31.923+00:00Thank you for your comment; I never really though ...Thank you for your comment; I never really though of why at the time of writing; I guess in five sentences sometimes why doesn't matter. But I think you're right about revenge. xx Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-3438191618839299412013-02-06T15:36:17.166+00:002013-02-06T15:36:17.166+00:00Great piece! I thought the writing itself was very...Great piece! I thought the writing itself was very delicate. Not only while I thought that he was genuinely in love but the reveal as well was very smooth.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14261598391919619660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-72020132035719820112013-02-06T12:16:12.262+00:002013-02-06T12:16:12.262+00:00Oh that's brilliant! Great piece - even remind...Oh that's brilliant! Great piece - even reminded me of the book Perfume. Well done, flowed well and had such a punch at the end!Miranda Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11166000575283710451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-14409482061716493202013-02-05T16:10:08.577+00:002013-02-05T16:10:08.577+00:00I'd love to read more of this! Perfume killer,...I'd love to read more of this! Perfume killer, mercy! Well done. C.C. https://www.blogger.com/profile/06070310862785263964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-30847206585657838912013-02-03T19:30:27.433+00:002013-02-03T19:30:27.433+00:00Worrying! I like your serial killer pieces!Worrying! I like your serial killer pieces!Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-78168790109168030832013-02-03T14:29:10.854+00:002013-02-03T14:29:10.854+00:00I smell a murder mystery novel here.I smell a murder mystery novel here.K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-66959804827499530092013-02-03T08:29:17.121+00:002013-02-03T08:29:17.121+00:00wow the set up at the beginning was brill- theirs ...wow the set up at the beginning was brill- theirs me thinking he liked her but the ending then twisted and i want to know if she will be ok!! excellent post yet again xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-23857483842025346022013-02-02T18:06:37.626+00:002013-02-02T18:06:37.626+00:00ARGGHHH! Yet another reason I don't wear perf...ARGGHHH! Yet another reason I don't wear perfume and for sure will not after reading this scary tale. Good job!! :)Jayne Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01053366144206401836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-62985891766092224152013-02-02T16:25:21.961+00:002013-02-02T16:25:21.961+00:00A great story.
This delicate prompt is certainly h...A great story.<br />This delicate prompt is certainly having its more than fair share of gruesome tales.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-91774632710681963702013-02-02T13:52:41.158+00:002013-02-02T13:52:41.158+00:00This was a thriller! Well done! I want to know wha...This was a thriller! Well done! I want to know what happened!<br />McGuffy's Reader<br />http://www.mcguffysreader.blogspot.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-86663135407937599592013-02-02T02:18:46.914+00:002013-02-02T02:18:46.914+00:00This endeavor communicates an underlying sense of ...This endeavor communicates an underlying sense of revenge of the killer, a killer who had been jilted by a woman he had once been madly in love with. This created a furor within him, which lead to his killing her. Now the scent of this same perfume instantly turns himself a Mr. Hyde, as he reacts once again out of pure emotion remembering what had once happen in his past.<br /><br />Would love for you to check out my endeavor to this prompt of "DELICATE." THANKSRobin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.com