tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post1767084427415129625..comments2023-10-22T16:41:05.861+01:00Comments on Lizzie Koch Author : #poemwalk2012Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-65440503610714709672012-10-26T14:47:19.664+01:002012-10-26T14:47:19.664+01:00Thank you Sarah. What a lovely positive comment. I...Thank you Sarah. What a lovely positive comment. I enjoyed the challenge. . . .in the end. xxx Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-74184436363245596132012-10-26T13:44:19.341+01:002012-10-26T13:44:19.341+01:00It may have been an experiment but it was far from...It may have been an experiment but it was far from a carcrash as you feared it might be.<br />I think it worked great - Shadow Stalkers - definitely up there with the scary stuff you don't want to bump into on a dark night!<br />I love the idea of the moon hiding awaiting her "glorious sister" to rise again.<br />A very imaginative, original take on the idea.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07953334708365738152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-797331727301677692012-10-25T22:49:56.085+01:002012-10-25T22:49:56.085+01:00Cool! Pleased it had the desired affect on you. xx...Cool! Pleased it had the desired affect on you. xxx Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-32345198640089747192012-10-25T22:48:23.021+01:002012-10-25T22:48:23.021+01:00Aww, thank you so much! I do like alliteration in ...Aww, thank you so much! I do like alliteration in poetry. I'm pleased you have read and enjoyed; it's fantastic to get new readers! xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-61400360243894594162012-10-25T22:46:05.377+01:002012-10-25T22:46:05.377+01:00You don't need my permission to use that phras...You don't need my permission to use that phrase chick. I'm sure it's out there somewhere in many a book. I had fun with this one once I new where I was going! Pleased you like. xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-76909264055636075242012-10-25T22:44:32.329+01:002012-10-25T22:44:32.329+01:00Thank you Ruth! And thanks for running the event a...Thank you Ruth! And thanks for running the event and giving me the opportunity to try something new. xxx Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-67539877798211456272012-10-24T19:13:28.140+01:002012-10-24T19:13:28.140+01:00Beautiful and spooky, I don't like the sound o...Beautiful and spooky, I don't like the sound of Shadow Stalkers. Made me shiver x.<br /><br />Lesley Beetonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18384323023378437869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-26850683852555219862012-10-22T07:59:57.452+01:002012-10-22T07:59:57.452+01:00This is just lovely. There's a great build up ...This is just lovely. There's a great build up of tension throughout, beautiful imagery, and I just love the juxtaposition of these two sentences: "Padded paws prowled. A heartfelt howl to the moon echoed through naked trees"--the alliteration, the repetition of that plaintive "ow" sound in "prowled" and "howl", the cadence--wonderful.Kern Windwraithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16771591425163484238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-44722324451130422072012-10-16T23:24:54.038+01:002012-10-16T23:24:54.038+01:00Beautiful imagery Lizzie! I loved 'ribbons of ...Beautiful imagery Lizzie! I loved 'ribbons of light shimmered', when you see that in something I write you'll know I stole the phrase from you...love it! (I'll hide it in a novel somewhere one day, with your permission!)<br />You had me out there shivering in the woods!Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-45182892803572352532012-10-16T20:38:41.094+01:002012-10-16T20:38:41.094+01:00Love it!! Spine-tingling and beautiful all at once...Love it!! Spine-tingling and beautiful all at once! So many lovely phrases: the moon to cast her innocence ... ribbons of light shimmered ...<br />heartfelt howl to the moon.<br /><br />Thank you so much for joining the fun!! xoBullishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05343416717330536392noreply@blogger.com