tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post7420133367525547724..comments2023-10-22T16:41:05.861+01:00Comments on Lizzie Koch Author : 5 Sentence Fiction PurpleAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-88979576942906450892013-02-18T21:07:17.758+00:002013-02-18T21:07:17.758+00:00Thank you. I do try ;-) xxThank you. I do try ;-) xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-62180332926671013672013-02-18T21:06:54.447+00:002013-02-18T21:06:54.447+00:00Thanks Josie. I really wanted to be kind to purple...Thanks Josie. I really wanted to be kind to purple as it's such a lovely colour but couldn't ignore how purple can at times be harsh. x Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-30489343568958113132013-02-18T21:05:29.521+00:002013-02-18T21:05:29.521+00:00Thanks Lisa; i like that - poignant purple. xThanks Lisa; i like that - poignant purple. xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-7478009508317443302013-02-18T21:05:00.956+00:002013-02-18T21:05:00.956+00:00Thank you. it is my favourite colour so it was eas...Thank you. it is my favourite colour so it was easy to communicate its gorgeousness.x Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-54242009440297245032013-02-17T17:12:18.433+00:002013-02-17T17:12:18.433+00:00wow you have done it again! brilliant use of the p...wow you have done it again! brilliant use of the prompt!! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-88682761133012722362013-02-13T04:11:14.944+00:002013-02-13T04:11:14.944+00:00This is intense and pulls you right in to the slam...This is intense and pulls you right in to the slam ending, which slaps us from our comfort amidst the purple pillows... just as it needs to do. Very well done, powerful!Josie Two Shoeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18388032819905416258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-46806758692059351562013-02-12T14:05:00.560+00:002013-02-12T14:05:00.560+00:00Great contrast, it was all so beautiful until she ...Great contrast, it was all so beautiful until she glanced in the mirror. Poignant purple.Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-47986360456472303662013-02-11T19:03:18.529+00:002013-02-11T19:03:18.529+00:00I liked how you communicated her love of the color...I liked how you communicated her love of the color so clearly, and then her distaste for it in the end. Well done. C.C. https://www.blogger.com/profile/06070310862785263964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-56390843251861710152013-02-10T02:18:36.320+00:002013-02-10T02:18:36.320+00:00I have learned a new word - trilby! I have learned a new word - trilby! K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-84393715282477912282013-02-10T00:57:55.952+00:002013-02-10T00:57:55.952+00:00Thank you. Purple is such a gorgeous colour. I wan...Thank you. Purple is such a gorgeous colour. I wanted to do it justice and write about how it makes me feel . . but that would have been just boring so went dark . . .again. xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-37048478986120793102013-02-10T00:56:54.003+00:002013-02-10T00:56:54.003+00:00I wanted it to be all fluffy and nice as purple is...I wanted it to be all fluffy and nice as purple is my favourite colour and it would have been rude not to mention Elizabeth Taylor when talking of violet. But I ended up wondering where it would lead which was nowhere so I had to go dark. A common theme with the other entries I know. I do read the others once I've entered mine but great minds think alike and yes. . .I think a stiff drink in a bar with some cool detective character in a trilby would be just what Claire needs. xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-58561766501587664742013-02-10T00:42:23.220+00:002013-02-10T00:42:23.220+00:00This was great. The beauty and glamour contrasting...This was great. The beauty and glamour contrasting with the darkness of purple. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-47169440413082992272013-02-09T23:37:02.657+00:002013-02-09T23:37:02.657+00:00This is a little scary - all these "purple&qu...This is a little scary - all these "purple" stories about women getting smacked in the face - including mine (and Kayla's, and now yours)! BTW, she didn't happen to go out and meet an old friend in a bar after all this happened, did she?<br /><br />Your story, however, is well done!<br /><br />To be honest, if she looked like Elizabeth Taylor, I'd be willing to forgive a few watermarks on the furniture.K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-22212967481318764802013-02-09T23:17:33.441+00:002013-02-09T23:17:33.441+00:00It took some tweaking chick so not to give the gam...It took some tweaking chick so not to give the game away so early on. Glad you liked; I thought you would considering you love purple too (until the end of course). xxx Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-10988135782092849632013-02-09T22:52:54.286+00:002013-02-09T22:52:54.286+00:00I really love this!!!! The most beautiful colour e...I really love this!!!! The most beautiful colour ending up being scary and sad. Really good honey. Never expected that ending :-)<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com