tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post5984038966696640944..comments2023-10-22T16:41:05.861+01:00Comments on Lizzie Koch Author : Five sentence fiction DoorsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-84570523091343716392014-05-24T18:01:32.290+01:002014-05-24T18:01:32.290+01:00I had it in my mind she was on her way home from w...I had it in my mind she was on her way home from work, caught in the storm, thinking her keys were nestled in the bottom of her bag. I wrote from experience. Easily done when running round like a lunatic in the morning and no time to do anything lol. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-63123593572701081622014-05-24T17:54:52.927+01:002014-05-24T17:54:52.927+01:00Oh wow, thank you so much! I really appreciate you...Oh wow, thank you so much! I really appreciate you visiting and commenting! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-20517498014361051412014-05-24T17:54:06.996+01:002014-05-24T17:54:06.996+01:00Written from experience! And yes, I did scream! Th...Written from experience! And yes, I did scream! Thanks for visiting Miranda. xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-57670065893283834722014-05-24T17:47:35.934+01:002014-05-24T17:47:35.934+01:00Thank you!! xxxThank you!! xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-15156013653339647382014-05-24T17:43:15.442+01:002014-05-24T17:43:15.442+01:00Thank you for such a lovely comment! xThank you for such a lovely comment! xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-32809066914149900112014-05-24T11:19:08.489+01:002014-05-24T11:19:08.489+01:00Thank you Donna. xThank you Donna. xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-75089040172711448702014-05-24T11:18:43.394+01:002014-05-24T11:18:43.394+01:00Thank you Jan! xxThank you Jan! xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-36205530707711778842014-05-24T11:16:16.628+01:002014-05-24T11:16:16.628+01:00Lol, sorry. :-) xLol, sorry. :-) xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-15186598785027615822014-05-16T03:57:06.292+01:002014-05-16T03:57:06.292+01:00I really loved reading this. I found it quite thou...I really loved reading this. I found it quite thought provoking as it raises the question, at least in my "little" mind, of what had been the reason of why she had apparently rushed out of her warm, cozy home into the turmoil which raged outside, leaving her keys on the kitchen table, forgetting that all the outside doors automatically lock when they're closed.Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-43526947234824455202014-05-14T20:00:24.329+01:002014-05-14T20:00:24.329+01:00Thank you! XThank you! XAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-65590321797405043472014-05-14T19:33:53.330+01:002014-05-14T19:33:53.330+01:00They say write about what you know. :-)They say write about what you know. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-7125680144047632172014-05-11T20:19:18.818+01:002014-05-11T20:19:18.818+01:00This was superb!! You created such an expectation ...This was superb!! You created such an expectation and the end was quite devastating for poor Evie! ;) <a href="http://www.makeitbeayoutiful.blogspot.in" rel="nofollow">Aditi</a>Aditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07881690136782545422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-61887584960106339412014-05-11T16:08:00.214+01:002014-05-11T16:08:00.214+01:00Oh no!!! The frustration and the tiresome length o...Oh no!!! The frustration and the tiresome length of the journey really came through in the writing and then that moment! I would have screamed! LOLMiranda Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11166000575283710451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-48110949185359241672014-05-11T08:07:41.698+01:002014-05-11T08:07:41.698+01:00Ha,been there, done that! With chocolate waiting, ...Ha,been there, done that! With chocolate waiting, I'd be chewing the door off its hinges! ;-) Wonderfully descriptive, a great read. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-66395494006295282822014-05-10T23:51:20.015+01:002014-05-10T23:51:20.015+01:00wow.. how beautiful you've described the fierc...wow.. how beautiful you've described the fierce hold of the thunderstorm and what a frustation it is to miss the hot choc.. loved it:)<br />priya raj - http://pencilstripes.blogspot.com/2014/05/being-mother-is-attitude.htmlAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04549083043819855410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-41328019447405880452014-05-10T19:47:58.772+01:002014-05-10T19:47:58.772+01:00I loved this...especially the frustration at the e...I loved this...especially the frustration at the end. Well done!!!<br /><br />D.B. McNicol<br /><a href="http://dbmcnicol.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Romance & Mystery...writing my life</a>Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-77430026988722882222014-05-10T18:49:20.269+01:002014-05-10T18:49:20.269+01:00I really crave hot chocolate too after reading thi...I really crave hot chocolate too after reading this!!! I could so picture the rain drenching her and I could recognise her desperateness to get home. What a great 5 sentences!!! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-5380195092119918642014-05-10T16:36:16.704+01:002014-05-10T16:36:16.704+01:00oh! poor Evie...I was so craving for that hot choc...oh! poor Evie...I was so craving for that hot chocolate myself.JANUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06983287092498427967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-36545045535707258182014-05-10T14:14:35.231+01:002014-05-10T14:14:35.231+01:00Want a hot shower after reading this, could feel t...Want a hot shower after reading this, could feel the cold miserable wet weather. Fab tale :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00971686377049763453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-68934871451794213842014-05-10T11:34:40.335+01:002014-05-10T11:34:40.335+01:00This is brilliant! I have sooo been there before.....This is brilliant! I have sooo been there before...you described the rain with exactness and I bet anyone reading this will recall the last time they got stuck in a rainstorm, wishing for home! Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.com