tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post2986029799803340224..comments2023-10-22T16:41:05.861+01:00Comments on Lizzie Koch Author : Freedom Five Sentence FictionAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-39202666472394071362014-05-07T16:31:36.313+01:002014-05-07T16:31:36.313+01:00Thanks Chick. I love your optimism for Liam and hi...Thanks Chick. I love your optimism for Liam and his wife in this situation. xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-42397778597133744342014-05-07T16:30:50.941+01:002014-05-07T16:30:50.941+01:00Thank you! So pleased you liked! Thanks for taking...Thank you! So pleased you liked! Thanks for taking time to read and comment. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-58438282586626650862014-05-07T16:30:03.305+01:002014-05-07T16:30:03.305+01:00I like the idea of splendid. I like the idea of splendid. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-451231548388727942014-05-07T16:28:42.378+01:002014-05-07T16:28:42.378+01:00I know! Thanks for your support and kind words. I know! Thanks for your support and kind words. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-88304046599558593172014-05-07T16:18:11.003+01:002014-05-07T16:18:11.003+01:00Thank you! Looking forward to the next one now! Thank you! Looking forward to the next one now! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-55020753995270190082014-05-07T16:06:50.627+01:002014-05-07T16:06:50.627+01:00Thank you!!! Glad you liked and got it. It'll ...Thank you!!! Glad you liked and got it. It'll be a looooooong five years but hopefully they'll be OK . . . Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-63608663666175714542014-05-07T16:04:23.634+01:002014-05-07T16:04:23.634+01:00Thanks for the feedback. As far as the wife goes, ...Thanks for the feedback. As far as the wife goes, yes, I feel for her but also Liam as he's also an innocent party, having rejected her advances. Thanks for reading and taking time to comment. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-70282879353751993232014-05-07T16:00:12.831+01:002014-05-07T16:00:12.831+01:00It was touch and go with the ending but, yes, glad...It was touch and go with the ending but, yes, glad I stuck to the miserable ending. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. Much appreciated. xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-47260032728113436182014-05-06T22:12:26.191+01:002014-05-06T22:12:26.191+01:00Oh poor Liam and his wife!!!! I think they will su...Oh poor Liam and his wife!!!! I think they will survive the 5 years. I get the feeling they are both so in love and strong and committed. Love this one honey. xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-73638887974424629932014-05-05T20:13:32.565+01:002014-05-05T20:13:32.565+01:00It's a beautiful story,Lizzie.It's a beautiful story,Lizzie.Ranu 802https://www.blogger.com/profile/00928109626033735690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-74328813038678312262014-05-05T18:36:39.273+01:002014-05-05T18:36:39.273+01:00It's good, but you could have made it splendid...It's good, but you could have made it splendid with a bit of finesse. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08072706847612015670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-34259015585279594852014-05-05T00:43:23.926+01:002014-05-05T00:43:23.926+01:00Great stuff Lizzie...how anyone could misinterpret...Great stuff Lizzie...how anyone could misinterpret your writing us beyond me...I hope there is retribution for the lying woman. Nothing worse than being accused of something you didn't do! Hope he gets her on his appeal, lol.Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-67094067273364868552014-05-04T22:13:40.575+01:002014-05-04T22:13:40.575+01:00Agree with Ruth, loved this. So much emotion in su...Agree with Ruth, loved this. So much emotion in such a short work, you've not lost your 5sf touch xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00971686377049763453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-23138146067098426852014-05-04T22:11:11.806+01:002014-05-04T22:11:11.806+01:00Great take on the prompt, Lizzie. I can't imag...Great take on the prompt, Lizzie. I can't imagine there is anything more wrenching than being sentenced for something you didn't do! I hope they make it through the five years - together in spite of the difficulties!! xoBullishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05343416717330536392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-65513398979501952392014-05-04T21:10:40.253+01:002014-05-04T21:10:40.253+01:00Hi Lizzie,
This is definitely a thought provoking...Hi Lizzie,<br /><br />This is definitely a thought provoking piece.<br /><br />While it seems Liam had been totally unfaithful to his dear wife by getting involved with the tramp of he did, and got what he deserved; the high-priced harlot didn’t like what he’d done to her by having dared to use another slut one night when she couldn’t be with him when he wanted her to. Revenge is sweet, however someone who is innocent and totally not involved with what had transpired has to suffer. <br /><br />I feel sorry for his wife who now must suffer for five years without his presence; and must now also decide whether or not she still wants to have anything to do with him.<br /><br />WELL DONE ! ! !<br /><br />Did I read too much into what you wrote here, or is this the image you wanted us to get?<br />Robin Leigh Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10039479316999317747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-18044099731397720622014-05-04T21:08:53.300+01:002014-05-04T21:08:53.300+01:00Whoa Lizzie! You packed a load of drama into five ...Whoa Lizzie! You packed a load of drama into five sentences. I really enjoyed it. And good job not going for the happy ending. Martyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02366449267039641100noreply@blogger.com