tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post2662942677711489089..comments2023-10-22T16:41:05.861+01:00Comments on Lizzie Koch Author : 5 Sentence Fiction LostAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-16993776492651309032012-06-18T21:12:15.154+01:002012-06-18T21:12:15.154+01:00Wow, thank you Lillie, that means so much! I reall...Wow, thank you Lillie, that means so much! I really appreciate your comment! Glad you liked too. xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-75601067806716961792012-06-18T01:05:11.411+01:002012-06-18T01:05:11.411+01:00Such an interesting and unexpected take on the pro...Such an interesting and unexpected take on the prompt! Nicely done :) That third sentence is written so well, it just flows beautifully and says so much!!Lillie McFerrinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05367116687588265202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-84477218917260262042012-06-15T14:25:51.200+01:002012-06-15T14:25:51.200+01:00Thank you. I wasn't sure where I was going wit...Thank you. I wasn't sure where I was going with Lost as I seemed to be just that with this prompt for a for bit. xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-37308941719412422362012-06-14T21:33:39.207+01:002012-06-14T21:33:39.207+01:00Fantastic! I love the line "suffocating sleaz...Fantastic! I love the line "suffocating sleaze". Beautifully told, you packed the full story in such a small space. Great take on the prompt, I loved where you went with this!Melanie Colehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06677477295913962657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-16223934324156906482012-06-14T21:27:50.934+01:002012-06-14T21:27:50.934+01:00Cheers chicken! I did struggle with Lost but it se...Cheers chicken! I did struggle with Lost but it seems to have worked out ok once I got the plane crash and Sawyer from that TV show out of my head lol. Thank you for your comment!! xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-1798612935109213412012-06-14T21:25:39.114+01:002012-06-14T21:25:39.114+01:00With celebville, there's so much fake going on...With celebville, there's so much fake going on that do we ever see a real smile? And do they have anything to give a real smile for? Pleased you liked and found the time to comment. xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-28134441210334178482012-06-14T21:24:13.447+01:002012-06-14T21:24:13.447+01:00I wonder too actually . . I'm pleased its rais...I wonder too actually . . I'm pleased its raised some questions for you to ponder. Thank you for coming by. xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-72006414167042362222012-06-14T21:22:18.510+01:002012-06-14T21:22:18.510+01:00Thank you! I did struggle as I kept thinking of th...Thank you! I did struggle as I kept thinking of the TV show! xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-78524494428102073672012-06-14T21:21:32.488+01:002012-06-14T21:21:32.488+01:00Thank you. I think some celebs do but then others ...Thank you. I think some celebs do but then others crave the lime light!<br />Thank you for your comment. xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-88544135207464913542012-06-14T21:20:14.762+01:002012-06-14T21:20:14.762+01:00I didn't know about that but not surprised.
T...I didn't know about that but not surprised. <br />Thank you for reading. :-) xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-9523239363714993112012-06-14T21:18:27.539+01:002012-06-14T21:18:27.539+01:00Lol . . . you never know. . .I kept thinking of th...Lol . . . you never know. . .I kept thinking of that darn TV show and then the beach and here we are. Glad you liked. :-))xxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-21540970232871638402012-06-14T01:33:26.866+01:002012-06-14T01:33:26.866+01:00What a creative take on the prompt. I loved that y...What a creative take on the prompt. I loved that you explored the different parts of the celebrity life that we do not see as much. Vivid details also! Nice work!Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03733516439846527903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-88961153348112404662012-06-13T07:31:05.696+01:002012-06-13T07:31:05.696+01:00I really like your take on the prompt! Getting los...I really like your take on the prompt! Getting lost on purpose. Loved the newspaper blowing by and those final words: "a REAL smile." :)Bullishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05343416717330536392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-47503161188647649082012-06-13T05:43:14.909+01:002012-06-13T05:43:14.909+01:00Love it ...What a relief and sense of freedom. Won...Love it ...What a relief and sense of freedom. Wonder how she managed to get herself lost. Hope she stays lost as long as she possible before the FEDs get involved. Nice work.Lora's ~ Journalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09627397950284112758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-73293653925905589142012-06-12T12:24:09.169+01:002012-06-12T12:24:09.169+01:00Purposefully lost and loving it! Enjoyed the spin ...Purposefully lost and loving it! Enjoyed the spin you put on the prompt!JennaQuentinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06794730025120308897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-79270920248803041022012-06-12T11:04:53.242+01:002012-06-12T11:04:53.242+01:00I enjoyed this. I sometimes wonder whether these ...I enjoyed this. I sometimes wonder whether these celebs do really want some peace and quiet, but you conveyed this sense of freedom well.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-48230991009515139712012-06-12T03:31:26.961+01:002012-06-12T03:31:26.961+01:00I've got a feeling this happens all too often ...I've got a feeling this happens all too often in that world of celebs. I remember a case like that in SoCal some years ago. Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-9216162921648826772012-06-11T23:38:06.767+01:002012-06-11T23:38:06.767+01:00Third sentence is my favourite! I loved the premis...Third sentence is my favourite! I loved the premise, some celebs seem to exist to fill magazines, but there are so many more who must feel just as you've put across so eloquently. Glad she's getting a break...and maybe, just maybe, she'll bump into Sawyer...lol xxLisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-15334311853121136962012-06-11T22:15:56.464+01:002012-06-11T22:15:56.464+01:00Thank you chicken . . I have been thinking about t...Thank you chicken . . I have been thinking about this one for days and then thought of celebrity and off I went. I totally agree with you and pleased you liked and it gave oyu food for thought. . . . now where's that heat mag? xxxxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3644161861541388781.post-17080410511255187012012-06-11T22:02:53.036+01:002012-06-11T22:02:53.036+01:00I totally agree with your last note about not know...I totally agree with your last note about not knowing the real world of celebrity. I love this piece of fiction. I only ever think about what lives they lead, all that money and fame and they can do everything they ever want. We only ever see the photos where celebs are enjoying themselves so why think otherwise? I hope Cindy stays missing for as long as she needs to!!! Great job and makes the reader really think.xxxxJan F.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04469298095233206280noreply@blogger.com